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by =EHB
Writewrite not a command but a plea for sanity for order, for creativity i clammor in my bones in my heart throwing stones hard at this ribbed cage let these words go! let them free! beautiful girls and lives planned out to fit a memoir's expensive pages when will i write mine? in the months before i die? i never liked to leave things out but what of my death? that's not the point, she screams of Robin Hood, Elizabeth and Jane details, details... wherein lies the purpose? the purpose is not set methinks raWrite
by =EHB
China Townstolen moments in San Fransisco hopping the bart how funny, let's sing it in casual voices on trains over loud speakers Lombard and hiking in New Balance sneakers under flash camera lights in and out of focus a corner grocery and liquor the city lights and the wasp hum of cables the clat-clat of cars flowers watch from bay windows people beg and smoke at intersections street signs make every up and down feel like a landmark fleshing out the city in fire escapes and high heels clacking past ChinaChina Town
by =EHB
Venussome memories are just paintings nothing moreVenus
coffee street lights on circles short-haired girls with dogs and environmentalists on clifftops Venus lighting our path to happiness
by =EHB
Eridanuscold's setting in last winter late night phone conversations with late night sleepers late night breathers lovers – late night hanger-uppers i'm dreaming of your warm again this summer – late autumnember cold dark Eridanus and the coldest darkest ropes of a kiss how high is the cliff from which loves falls gushing over jagged rocks through mountain vales?Eridanus
by =EHB
by =EHB
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by =Corina90
Corina, this all dialogue story/poem is captivating, keeping me guessing which promise will come next, which will be rejected and which...
by `Cyantre
Aha, sorry for apologizing, it sets a nice introductory tone for the rest of the poem. Fellow writers have commented to me on some of m...
by `Iscariot-Priest
1) A enjoyable piece of deviant community foolery, great introduction to the many humorous poems of your collection. 2) This one reflec...
by =guagna
Hey Honey, You’d think there’s only so much you can do with a restriction like: you have to use these six words. But as ...
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An Irishman has an abiding sense of tragedy that sustains him through temporary bouts of joy.
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i'm not afraid to die. but i'm afraid to dry./
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