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Haiku

According to the dictionary, a haiku is a japanese poem of seventeen syllables in lines of five, seven, and five, or an English imitation of this. I should think that it could be an any-language imitation of this, but I was looking it up in an American dictionary.

Because of this definition I think, many people who write/read haiku assume that it has to be seventeen syllables in lines of five, seven, and five, and so feel confined to this. Some people even frown upon haikus that do not abide by the syllable count. Other writers may even feel that haiku is just not worth writing, and choose to miss out on it.

Think carefully for a moment. What if the beauty of writing were based on the syllable count?

Now. A high school English teacher of mine once remarked that the essence of haiku lies in the final thought. The first two lines of a haiku may be airy, wispy, bringing you closer to the realization in the final line, which more often than not takes a huge giant leap and lands somewhere far away from the place where the beginning of the haiku started. The beginning of a haiku might be called a springboard, the last line the dive, the splash.

Of course the lines are simply a framework, just as the syllables are. The beauty of a haiku is like the beauty of all writing, it is found in the writing and the reading of it. Frames can be beautiful, but do not ignore the art inside. We humans love frames, don’t we? Some things do look better with them, like mascara about the eye. It really just depends on you.

Don’t go looking for your inspiration for haiku in the number of syllables, rather go looking for inspiration where you normally do. It is the same inspiration that brings all of your writing to life.
©2009 =EHB
:iconehb:

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With haikuwrimo coming up...I have been thinking a lot about haikus and had the urge to give everyone a bit to ponder. Mind you this is my own haiku experience, feel free to share yours, agree or differ. I was going to post this as a journal originally! I've made it short and sweet...haha. Just like haiku. Thank you.

Note `MSJames if you are participating in haikuwrimo in February.

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:iconguagna:
haikus are wonderful short little poems, and you do a good job of outlining them here.

one question tho... aren't you not allowed to rhyme? or is it just that you dont have to?


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98% of teenagers drink or have been around alcohol.
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Hope dangles on a string
Like slow spinning redemption
Winding in and winding out
The shine of it has caught my eye
:iconehb:
I have no idea! But I have read haikus in both Japanese and in English which have rhymed. Granted I could not understand the Japanese one, but the words rhymed. That would be especially hard in Japanese when everything ends in "maru" or some such type thing. Everything rhymes LOLz.

Thank you for reading. I would like to know more about this so called no rhyming rule..I hope you participate!
:iconguagna:
lol maybe that was just cause when we learned it in middle school, everyone assumed poems HAD to rhyme, so it was just to clear that up

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98% of teenagers drink or have been around alcohol.
Paste this if you like muffins.

Hope dangles on a string
Like slow spinning redemption
Winding in and winding out
The shine of it has caught my eye
:iconguagna:
:giggle:

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98% of teenagers drink or have been around alcohol.
Paste this if you like muffins.

Hope dangles on a string
Like slow spinning redemption
Winding in and winding out
The shine of it has caught my eye
:iconlasadie:
all my haiku's follow the five, seven, five outline, but i never even knew that was an actuall guidline.
:iconehb:
It's a guideline...which you can follow if you like. :)
:icontailscoolio:
Haiku's are always so alluring to me, they prove that things don't have to be complicated to prove a good point... :aww:

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:iconehb:
They really don't, I am glad you read. The beauty of Haiku is for everyone.

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